Reviews for First Time
AngelaRochelle chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
Aw, this is very sad. It was beautifully written all the up through the end, although I wasn't expecting the ending!
theycallmetalljake chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
Aw... It's so sweet and full of emotion, especially the end. Also it flows and rhymes easily and is just pleasant to read.
MADdreamers chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
This is really great. I don't know how else to describe it. All your works are amazing. It brings out emotions you can't put anywhere else besides on paper (or on the internet). Well done, and thanks for sharing. I hope all goes well in the future.
Campion41 chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
That's so sad! Touching, really; it made me want to cry!
ScarletRubie chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
it's cute, i like that it sort of led you through an extended amount of time :)
sapphirevirgo15 chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
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Evilives chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
I agree it's got nice rythm and is quite nostalgic.

The later scenrio seems so horribly familiar...:(
sharon-cooley chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
This is really good; I like it. It does make you think, about first times and past times. The rythm is good, it flows nicely. All in all a wonderful poem.
Jamie Cooper chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
i really love this poem. I think it is good inspiration and gets you into a thinking mood. i think that it has a good rhythm to it and keeps you interested with the sudden rhyme.

keep writing...

P.S thank you for reviewing my story