Reviews for The Undead
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Wow, I don't think I could write something this good in 7 minutes. Great poem!
Reel Wander chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
7 minutes

fierce! nice!
EvilEmoElmoKillsSanta chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
This is damn good for somthing written in 7 minutes. I like it.
AngelaRochelle chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
This is pretty good. I'm a fan of fast-paced rhyming like this. It's a short, easy read. It's very good for something you had to write about in seven minutes. Sometimes the best works are produced under pressure!
Negasi chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
I like it. The first four lines are my favourite, especially the bit about being damned to Hell, before they had a chance. It really portays a kind of sympathetic to the undead emotion, and I like that! On a constructive criticism note, a few of the lines feel a little too long when reading it in my head, but that could just be me! Either way I really like this, and I'm glad I took the time to read it!
cab fed hig chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
fierce and terrible subject i think, but well-written. there are the mingled elements of grace and terror.
Irish toaster chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
This was 'dead' good. Sorry for the pun. I liked this poem :)