Reviews for Mortality
BringxMexToxLife chapter 2 . 2/26/2011
Very good! I can't wait for upcoming chapters!

~TheMythTheManTheAuthor~
angel cloud chapter 3 . 2/13/2011
loving it! next chapter please.
Ithebooklover chapter 3 . 2/10/2011
I'm intrigued... Wow, I wonder how they will find out about Ali, when even she doesn't know about herself? Can't wait for the next chapter!
angel cloud chapter 2 . 2/1/2011
next please. you might have to explain the leg braces to me in a later chapter, but so far this is looking really good.
Ram Attra chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Thie is good continue.

PS could you read my one?
angel cloud chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Next please! this sounds like it is going to be excellent. please update soon. i love the description of your harpies.