Reviews for An Apocalypse Story
deadkitty1 chapter 13 . 12/2/2011
Funny and very entertaining! I thought the beginning chapters felt a bit overloaded with all the new characters being introduced too fast, but it got easier to remember them as I read on. Also the card game with Veronica seemed to drag on forever even if it was a matter of life or death. I guess there should be some humor to that. And everything made sense towards the end. Cool story!
Sarah chapter 13 . 3/19/2011
I have never written a review before, but here goes nothing...

I like the story and thought it was quite funny. My favorite chapter was Chapter 12 because it was funny and rather exciting. I also liked the part with the card games. I did find a typo in chapter 10: "'Who one?' he asked, breathless." I think it should be "'Who won?'" But anyway, I'm very impressed. The longest thing I've ever written was around 400 words and you managed to write something this long while keeping it funny and interesting. Good work!