|Reviews for Away from Earth|
| Reel Wander chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Struggling to live your life,
Struggling to be you,
with your past, present, and tomorrow
the past is gone,
today is just today.
tomorrow is long way away
trying to forget, but could not
trying to hold on,
hold all the memories
and live your life
Nice Poem, full of emotion
| EvilEmoElmoKillsSanta chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!
| Ice Bubble chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
So sad/sweet! Good job!
| MADdreamers chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
The more I read the more I like. You're really talented. I like how you left the story open enough to have readers think of their situations because it makes us feel like we can somehow relate to your story.
| samhus chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
Sad, but good. The last stanza was my favorite. Nice Job!
| Jamie Cooper chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
i like this rhyming pattern and the mystery behind the poem. It gives you room to make up your own version of events and also keeps your mind reeling with questions! i really like this. Keep it up