Reviews for Away from Earth
Reel Wander chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Struggling to live your life,

Struggling to be you,

with your past, present, and tomorrow

the past is gone,

today is just today.

tomorrow is long way away

trying to forget, but could not

trying to hold on,

hold all the memories

and live your life

Nice Poem, full of emotion
EvilEmoElmoKillsSanta chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
Ice Bubble chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
So sad/sweet! Good job!
MADdreamers chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
The more I read the more I like. You're really talented. I like how you left the story open enough to have readers think of their situations because it makes us feel like we can somehow relate to your story.
samhus chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
Sad, but good. The last stanza was my favorite. Nice Job!
Jamie Cooper chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
i like this rhyming pattern and the mystery behind the poem. It gives you room to make up your own version of events and also keeps your mind reeling with questions! i really like this. Keep it up