Reviews for Pain
Poet Lordy chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
Pain

I see.

As a small child standing there in the cold watching her Mother go must have been hard, fearful of asking her to stay as she walked without looking back, not being able to understand why she was leaving. Still standing there long after she left.

Hurtful in it's own right but comfort in the fact I feel she will be alright.

A small poem, written with great depth though, I can feel this oozing with life and a warm future.

Another perfectly formed piece and of the high standard I have become accustomed to.

I tip my hat once again to you L.

Mark.
cab fed hig chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
"My time was hers but for a word

I never heard." sad and left me a bit anxious. the situation seems so tense, and immediately builds something inside me not unlike sympathy or deep regret.