|Reviews for Vagabond|
| Fractured Illusion chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
I think you started strong. The first stanza in particular, I thought you had some nice wording going on there (marred history for one).
The rest of the piece was a bit of a disappointment in comparison though. It felt too repetitive in the message, like the same could have said with less.
It's a nice poem though with a good message.
PS! If your bored check out the Review Game's Review Marathon (link in my profile)