Reviews for returning love
Ivy Climbroe chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
I Love this! It has some sense of mystery to it! Very beautiful!
MADdreamers chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
This poem was very well written. There were a few spelling errors, but overall this poem was wonderful. The imagery was depicted so beautifully and the poem flowed together. Great poem and thanks for sharing it!
H8rPatrol chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
Simply; lovely
Revenge Is Bliss chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
Very well-written, although there are a few minor mistakes in it. It was deep and thought provoking. You used great details and it flowed together nicely. Overall, it was quite amazing.
SargentLooneyPencil chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
.. it's so beautiful... i love it...
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
Hey! Another amazing piece of work there! It makes me think of the people I have lost which is great because then the poem has a more personal connection to the reader. The way you portray and lay out the poem is beautiful and a great credit to you! I do have one small thing though, nothing major! Just that you put two i's in ivory when there should be one! But that is nothing and it doesn't spoil this masterpiece which you should be proud of.