|Reviews for Nightmare|
| meowmie chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
That would be a horrible nightmare to have!
| Mercyette chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
This is a review for the Review Game's Review Marathon. Check us out; there's a link in my profile!
I love the added detail and emotion you've put in this specific legend. I haven't seen it very often in your others, so this is a very nice change. Good job!
Again, I think in future revisions, you might want to put the "drips" and "screeches" somehow into the story rather than have them separated with asterisks. It makes it look less professional and takes away from your fine story.
| slave to the voices chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
I read this because of the urban legends forum I found. I have to say this was very creepy. Well drawn out without dragging. I'm not really a fan of the ending, but that's just my opinion. All in all, a nice job.
Anyway, I have a couple of urban legend stories "The Toe Monster" is a short with an alternate ending and "The Troll" is a longer piece but one of my favorites. Check them out if you get a chance.
| cmspencerfan chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
after a dream like that aint no way am i going to bed hehe nice story -)