Reviews for A Little Slice of Heaven
Blanc Casse chapter 21 . 2/14
Ok, well... the break-up from Allen was a bit anticlimactic. I was expecting a bit more... drama? Considering how blind she's been to Allen's abuse so far and how convinced she was that everything would be fine with her marriage, the change to "what an insensitive asshole" was a bit sudden. But hey, a happy ending anyway, so why look a gift horse in the mouth? :P

Great story, I liked it very much ;)
Blanc Casse chapter 18 . 2/13
Ugh, why is Georgia being such a douche? ! I seriously cannot understand how this woman thinks. I mean what expectations does she have for the future? Stay married forever and just string Jaz along? God, I have no patience with people like her. *sighs*

Listen, sorry is my reviews are a little too heated, I tend to get pretty involved in whatever it is I'm reading, heh :D
I mean it as a compliment, I only feel strongly about books I enjoy and this one is very, very nice :) Great job and thank you for sharing your work with us!
Blanc Casse chapter 16 . 2/13
I mean, seriously.
Blanc Casse chapter 15 . 2/13
I'm trying to keep an open mind here, but the fact that Georgia hasn't even considered leaving her husband up until this point bothers me no end. It feels like she's taking advantage of Jaz and she's the one that should fix this mess because she's the one who's married. Not to mention, why would anyone put up with Allen's level of bullshit anyway, affair or no affair? The man is an immature, petty, mean, abusive little arrogant piece of snot. Wake up and smell reality, Georgie-girl.
Blanc Casse chapter 12 . 2/12
God, what an absolute, total fucking asshole! I really hope she doesn't get back together with him. God, I feel like punching this guy until he starts crying, which would inevitably happen, and then punch him some more, just on principle.
Blanc Casse chapter 6 . 2/12
Oh, man, what a total douchebag! The line about "his" house rose my hackles so high I thought I was just about ready to have a fit. I bet he's racist as well. God, and Georgia is SO shy and meek I don't know how she's going to stand up to this asshole, but I'm really, REALLY hoping that she does, because baby... no house and wealthy living is worth your freedom, NONE. Actually, nothing is worth someone's freedom. I may be biased, but it's what I've come to treasure most in life. Freedom.
ImmanenceEnsured chapter 14 . 10/30/2013
This is an interesting story with two interesting women. Jaz is witty, a tad irresponsible. I do think it's very wrong to be in a relationship with an already-married women. A relationship like that, in my opinion, should be kept platonic, for both their mental health's sakes.
waterxeno chapter 22 . 10/15/2013
I just want to say that i'm already your fan hahaha i fell in love with jaz and georgia really! looking forward to the sequel *peeks on yor profile* hohohoh! i've enjoyed reading it especially the smut! I feel a nosebleed coming up despite i'm at work reading this lovely fic hahahaha HOT!
Guest chapter 22 . 3/31/2013
My this story enjoyed. You talented writer are.
MaXiSaWeSoMe135 chapter 13 . 3/25/2013
I love this story! This new Allen is messing me up though!
Rad Dude '89 chapter 22 . 3/17/2013
i've been readin this for the past 5 hours nonstop. damn. it's over lol. i was really in the zone lmao

i was anticipating more drama about the whole allen affair thing but i probably wouldn't've been able to take it tbh lol but man. great story bruh. wow
Hikaru Akihiro chapter 22 . 3/12/2013
Wow yet another a beautiful story. You always manage to capture emotions so well. No overly dramatic twists. Which I much prefer. The nicknames for both female friends being rather masculine was silly, but in a good way. I look forward to all your future stories whether they be fiction or fanfiction.
Hikaru Akihiro chapter 12 . 3/11/2013
"Jaz had the nerve to wave. "Hey, Al, how's it going?" she asked with a cheerful smile." As of right now my family thinks I'm nuts for my hysterical laughter.
JG chapter 3 . 11/20/2012
I've just started to read your story, I love it.
anon chapter 15 . 5/30/2012
nvm :P

And still loving it.
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