Reviews for A Little Slice of Heaven
zutAra101 chapter 5 . 3/3/2011
Love the chap, I like the fact that the gang is actually liking Georgia. I hope Allen won't be as bad as I think he will be.

Thanks for posting.

-Z
Biodragon chapter 4 . 2/26/2011
Good chapter, will be fun to see the interactions between the group and Georgia
Kitmaro chapter 4 . 2/24/2011
To worlds have met and now to see if they coexist or explode spectacularly. The all seem nice though.
The Eternally Heartbroken chapter 4 . 2/24/2011
I bet Georgia's a natural bowler.

Jaz's friends are...weird. Funny, but weird.

Please continue!
Sora chapter 3 . 2/23/2011
What a cute story! Never got around to making a friction press account so I thought I'd leave a lurky message instead and tell you I'm enjoying this one :P
SweetFangs chapter 2 . 2/23/2011
Interesting story. i feel like there's a big time gap between the first and second chapter. in the first chapter, Jaz and Georgia are like strangers but in the second one, Georgia had opened up quite a lot and isn't as shy and stuff.

btw, something just hit me. each of your chapter is like 5k words long. thats very long (to write). How much time do you spend on these stories? it takes me approx. 35rs for two pages (in a journal) -_-' and it's only like 200 words? maybe more.

Or maybe you just type way faster than i do and got a way more creative imagination lol
Kitmaro chapter 3 . 2/18/2011
Now I want cupcakes. Georgia is such a sweet person, I can't imagine many that would do something for another persons kids. Later.
zutAra101 chapter 3 . 2/18/2011
Finally got around to reading this, hm CUPCAKES!

Love this chap if not for the introduction of the friends or the continued development of the friendship between Jaz and Georgia then simply because of the sweets :D

Thanks for posting; till next week.

-Z
Biodragon chapter 3 . 2/18/2011
Those must be some good cupcakes, can't wait to for the next chapter
The Eternally Heartbroken chapter 3 . 2/17/2011
I love cupcakes.

Also, do you have any idea how long this story is going to be?
Biodragon chapter 2 . 2/11/2011
another good chapter, like the fleshing out of the characters :D
Kitmaro chapter 2 . 2/10/2011
Georgia is cute when she's all shy. And Jaz sounds all around fun to be with. Later.
zutAra101 chapter 2 . 2/10/2011
Loved this, really love the image of Jaz.

They're getting closer little by little.

Thanks for posting, till next week :)

-Z
berndi chapter 2 . 2/10/2011
Georgia is coming across incredibly sweet. It's cute :D

And Jaz's enthusiasm is really charming. She's just so candid, it seems. Which must be refreshing, for Georgia and her refined social circles.

Nice job!
The Eternally Heartbroken chapter 2 . 2/10/2011
Terrifying looking clowns? I hope you aren't talking about ICP...

Good chapter though. I'm really looking forward to next Thursday!
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