"Jaz had the nerve to wave. "Hey, Al, how's it going?" she asked with a cheerful smile." As of right now my family thinks I'm nuts for my hysterical laughter.

I've just started to read your story, I love it.

nvm :P

And still loving it.

Is Jaz half greek or swedish? Because I'm sure a few chapters ago she was swedish and now she's suddenly greek.

Anyway... I love this story.

Hello, Lunatic.

Wow. That’s a lot of cupcakes.

And what a lovely story this is. Plenty of drama, plenty of romance, plenty of twists that keep the plot engaging. Also, you write so stunningly well, it’s a pleasure to read over your work and see how your characters develop. Really, this was delightful.

I’m not one for romance (I’m more of a horror person, as my stories show) but I thoroughly enjoyed this one. ‘A Little Slice of Heaven’ indeed. All the best for your future projects.

AP

I loved this story. I just discovered your work last nite but I've already finished this story and the side story about this couple. I feel like I owe you money or something. It was just that good. I'm definitely a fan now.

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realize the author was StarvingLunatic

"Oh! Of course it was, who the fuck else?"

Seriously, this was a great piece. Very moving.

awwwww. that was so sweet. Since I'm not the sentimental type, perhaps it was a bit too sweet. And yay Georgie got her bakery opened! Everybody wins, right? But hey, whatever I thoroughly enjoyed that ending. I hope they grow old together. )

*wipes brow* oh thank god. the drama was killing me. Yay! Jaz and Georgie! lol

Reading that...minus the daughter-daddy part at the end...actually kinda hurt in a way. Yep. Love is definitely not whats up. I know, I know, sounds young and ignorant. But after all what Jaz has gone through...it doesn't sound appealing at all. Being 19 is angsty enough. And Jaz has enough strikes against her in life already. I'm sure she doesn't need this...

/

It's not the same anymore. Their relationship. Though it could've of been serious to begin with if she was married. Thats my opinion. Does that make me more mature than Jaz? Must be one of those facets of growing up that everyone hates. And falling in love sounds horrible. To everyone I've seen, heard, fictional and non-fictional. Hope it never happens to me.

It just gets more and more angsty...

:(

Allen. He's sketchy as hell, thats for sure. I don't even feel like saying anything about him.

I laughed at Jaz kicking the wall. Sometimes I forget she's just 19. Her father's reaction to that was funny as hell. My parents are the exact same way. Temper tantrums are not allowed anywhere near them or in the house. Fortunately, when I'm upset, I'm the type to sit silently and stew over my anger. Anway...getting off subject...

Poor Jaz. I'd love to give her a hug. I like hugs when I'm upset from attractive people. lol

oh and of course I laughed (yes, I'm a goofball I laugh alot) at Jaz grumbling over the whole lack-of-penis thing. I imagined her with a dildo and smirked. That would certainly be interesting. The plot has definitely "thickened" from when I first started reading. It was so innocent in the beginning...now its...rough. /

Okay...it's been a little minute since I've read this.

Coming back to this chapter in particular was quite a wake-up call. So, there was amazing times *wink, wink*, and there was...not-so-good times.

Georgia...was jealous? O_o? I keep getting surprised again, and again by this story! ) lol She is the last person I'd expect to feel that way! But hey Jaz is quite a catch so I'm surprised someone hasn't flirted w/ her before (in front of Georgie).

And, I think thats cool that Jaz know's another language fluently. She should speak it in the bedroom! ) well, actually I dont know if Greek sounds hot so...eh lol

And yes, the watch should be a red flag for Jaz...though that was kinda expected w/ the clothes and shoes.

Also, I HAD to laugh out loud at that "Medusa" bit about Jaz's hair. I've seen dreads gone wrong and laughed hard at the image. haha.

Oh, and Geo was right. Perhaps...Jaz makes her too comfortable. So much to say about that. Jaz's mom is right and usually I dont agree with the parents...but well, Jaz is going to be in for a rude awakening. It makes me sad, anxious...

There's alot to be said about this chapter. No, I dont have any thing snappy or witty to say.

Just that well, i guess it was a long time coming right.

Buuuuut, I thought "young dumb, and full of come" was hilarious. Sometimes, it seems like that couldn't be more true.