|Reviews for A Little Slice of Heaven|
| Just in cases chapter 22 . 6/28/2011
As always, your work blows me away. Your characters just seem to get stronger and more developed with each story I read. The level of immense 'dislike' (I still think hate is too strong a word) that Allen stirs, is a clear testament to this.
The themes are always plausible and the actions of your characters are realistically stupid, if that makes sense. Nobody makes right decisions all the time and often there isn't a right decision; I think Georgie and Jazz illustrate this wonderfully.
Its always a little bitter-sweet when one of your stories ends, I mean, what am I supposed to read now? :)
I can't wait 'till your next story begins, keep up the awesome work.
| Night3603 chapter 22 . 6/28/2011
Once again you blow me away with your stories SL. Just the level of conflict and utter stupidity your charecters sometimes have is amazing lol. Ive been meaning to read this but i wanted to wait till you finished and here i am at 4 am just now finishing in one day. I loved this story and ill be looking forward to your new additions. BTW i wish you would do more kim possible stories. Its dying over there in .
| HappyLittleVegemites chapter 22 . 6/27/2011
Ah yes, some good old lady loving :) That was definitely a great way to end the story. I can't wait for your future works!
| Katie chapter 22 . 6/27/2011
loved this :) so happy allen is out of the picture
looking forward to your new works, especially please baby's sequel
| Miss Peachy chapter 22 . 6/27/2011
I loved it! Such a great way to end a story, I'm so happy that Jaz and Georgia made up. And what a wonderful sex scene, my favorite of the whole story.
Good bye A Little Slice of Heaven! I can't wait for your future stories.
| Anon723723723 chapter 22 . 6/27/2011
Very nice. And sweet. And no Allen. Yes.
| Bloody Violet Heart chapter 22 . 6/27/2011
Enjoy it? I loved it! Your abilities never seize to amaze me. Entering one of your little worlds is like going to a fast food and realizing you are actually at a restaurant with a full course meal.
I do wonder though, how is possible for you, not only to overcome your writers block (if you get any) but to update weekly?
In any case, I was truly delighted. Now I can only hope you wont keep me waiting much longer for the sequel of "Please Baby".
| psychotic-cat17 chapter 22 . 6/27/2011
I really liked this epilogue. It bypasses the issue of Georgia's divorce while still touching on how it went, which I like. I was also really interest throughout the story if Georgia was ever going to open up her dream bakery and this sets up that she is well on her way to making that dream a reality. It doesn't seem as if Georgia and Jaz are exclusively living together yet, but they now have system that works with Jaz able to stay over night with Georgia without either being called home or being kicked out in a panic. Altogether, nicely tied up.
Thank you for writing another awesome story. I will be looking forward to your next creation.
| lloyd1191 chapter 22 . 6/27/2011
Hey Starving, another great story like always. There wasn't anything wrong to point out, except in the first or secong chapter. When Georgia said her age, I got confused, she should be 7 or 8 years younger than Jaz? That's the only thing that confused me. A thing I noticed is that one of the main characters is pretty dumb, but you put the reasons why, so I can't say anything about it. Overall, great story and I hope to read more from you. Good luck and until next time.
| SweetFangs chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
Haha. Even at the end, they went at it like rabbits.
Still, I'm happy that Georgia finally got to open her own bakery.
Will there be a sequel? I want to see more of Jaz and Georgia even if there'll be drama and more problems ahead.
They're such a sweet couple now that they're together without any more obstacles in their way.
| Mere Nova chapter 22 . 6/27/2011
*sniffle* Georgia's about to open her bakery...that's so awesome. Romance aside, I'm glad Georgia is doing something for herself, something that's hers and hers alone! That makes my day! Finally, Georgia has gained confidence and is living the dream. That's huge.
And Jaz and Georgia...*blush* aww
I can't believe my weekly addiction is over! I'm glad it ended happily. Thank you for writing this!
| Darkndangel9 chapter 20 . 6/26/2011
Oh man. I'm tearing up. Poor Jazzy! Georgia why aren't you fighting for you girl! UGH! I hope she finds his phone or something. I mean wth he's such a douche bag! Why would you even? UGH! I want them together because I think they are good together, but I want Jaz to be happy! And if that means away from Georgia I'll deal. Georgia also needs to look at her life choices. I want her to be happy too! Ahh the next chapter is the end! I'm so saaaad! Happy ending? At least as friends! can't wait!
| sirozorg chapter 21 . 6/24/2011
I don't now If I'm Happy or sad, happy because they are together! but sad because this was one of my favourite stories and now I haven't got any more to read! T_T Thx for this story!
| HappyLittleVegemites chapter 21 . 6/23/2011
okay so I'll admit you had me worried for the last couple of chapters that there wouldn't be a happy ending and then I'm thinking 'but I've read your other stories and they all have happy endings so...' Anyways you had me convinced they wouldn't try to work things out at all but I'm glad they did.
Allen is a dick, enough said.
Great ending though, I'm sorry that you've finished but I'm looking forward to reading your future posts. Thanks for writing this amazing story, you are honestly one of the best writers I've come across on fictionpress and fanfiction :)
| Miss Peachy chapter 21 . 6/23/2011
*sigh* What a wonderful ending. Georgie is back in my favor and Jaz is happy again. I'm so glad you ended the story like this, for a moment I thought they weren't going to get together in the end, but I was wrong, and thank God for that. XD
I'm going to miss this story dearly, it's so sweet and well written. I hope to see you and your stories around in the future too! Thanks for providing us readers with this beautiful peice or romance! Ta ta, love!