Reviews for Tongue
darkershadeofpale chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
It's gorgeous.

Short, but just ... wonderful. Really.

. darkershadeofpale
Rhocar chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
short but straight to the point, great stuff,

reminds me of a little saying that my dad used to quote

'put your brain into gear, before you open your mouth'
David Tenn chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
Short and powerful; it reminded me of a fragment of Shakespeare. Were you working with a specific meter? The flow of it felt a little off at the very end- the one immediately seen problem.
AterAeterna chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
I liked this piece, I liked the fact that that it was short and uncomplicated - To me it was simple, yet at the same time carried depth.

SomeRandomScribbles chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
Brilliant language, beautiful imagery - just a really fantastic poem :)