Reviews for Confinement
Lucky Star Fan chapter 6 . 5/30/2012
This is really good! I feel bad for these girls...
Guest chapter 6 . 5/25/2012
Sad how can you think about this
lala chapter 6 . 4/4/2012
i can see you are trying to show the life of a sex slave as accurately as you can, but maybe a little more detailed would be better. other than that its good.
random person chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
PLEASE PLEASE UPLOAD! And work on your grammar.
Me chapter 2 . 8/18/2011
Wow. Great story despite the grammar. UPDATE! PLEASE!
fizzy1254 chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
Ok... I think you have produced the story outline

rather well but your grammar confusion is about to let me

rip my hair out!

I am really sorry but you really have to work on it

if you want to continue to write stories
fizzy1254 chapter 5 . 7/20/2011
Well for the quote up the top, that really depends on what you're forced to do. Say, if I was sold to a prostitue house then my diginty would definetly come first.
Degrel chapter 5 . 7/4/2011
My life. I have had to sacrifice my dignity many times, but still I live on. That in itself is a kind of dignity. The day I decide I must retain my dignity in the face of something horrible, I will know it is my day to die.
Dragonfly75 chapter 5 . 6/15/2011
Great chapter! Liked it a lot! Update soon!
ViveWonderland chapter 5 . 6/9/2011
Life. I like the story, it is very sad.
zarazach chapter 5 . 6/6/2011
more more !

its awesome !
silentdarkseraphim chapter 5 . 6/5/2011
I suppose it depends on the circumstances... It also depends if you are the kind of person to beg for their life or has morals and values deeply rooted enough to stand for them, even in the face of death.

PM me if this doesn't make sense... If it does, PM me anyways...
Lia Jenson chapter 5 . 6/5/2011
I almost fell in love with this. Almost.

I would have if not for the horrendous amount of errors (grammar, blah) but I really do like the rest: subject matter, characters, and overall the plot managed to keep me reading.

However, I won't be popping up again. Good luck! :)
Dragonfly 75 chapter 4 . 5/12/2011
Good charpter. I liked it alot. Update soon!
Tayla RIdley chapter 2 . 5/9/2011
I thought that perhaps you needed

a bit more detail. Other than that

it was pretty good.
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