Reviews for Sex Slaves
jenn chapter 9 . 10/4/2012
this is so great ill be ur slave but if u do a notheer chapter plz?:*
Taylar chapter 9 . 10/3/2012
That was a good story! It kinda reminded me of the music video for were has love gone by Lisa mitts, you should check it out.
Guest chapter 7 . 10/2/2012
thisaccountgone chapter 8 . 8/31/2012
Please continue!
Bushwah chapter 8 . 7/29/2012
Update please.

And have her escape. One way... or another.
Bushwah chapter 5 . 7/29/2012
My life. Obviously.

If I die, then I will never see revenge.
BookAbooK chapter 8 . 6/15/2012
Ahhh fuck that last line .! Shit ! But ya know, a little more blood wud be better for a horror story (nah just kidding I am just crazy)

Spoiler: check my horror story lol

Will wait for your update! :3
Angia chapter 8 . 6/12/2012
poor Mia
BookAbooK chapter 4 . 6/6/2012
Really good, :) I read all this chapters already and I have to say they are pretty good, maybe your gramar can be a little bad, but it is okay with me since I am an English learner :D I have always wanted to read a prostitute-Horror- bloody- like story, and I just found it here :)

Will wait for more!
Lucky Star Fan chapter 6 . 5/30/2012
This is really good! I feel bad for these girls...
Guest chapter 6 . 5/25/2012
Sad how can you think about this
lala chapter 6 . 4/4/2012
i can see you are trying to show the life of a sex slave as accurately as you can, but maybe a little more detailed would be better. other than that its good.
random person chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
PLEASE PLEASE UPLOAD! And work on your grammar.
Me chapter 2 . 8/18/2011
Wow. Great story despite the grammar. UPDATE! PLEASE!
fizzy1254 chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
Ok... I think you have produced the story outline

rather well but your grammar confusion is about to let me

rip my hair out!

I am really sorry but you really have to work on it

if you want to continue to write stories
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