Reviews for The Rain
Luckycool9 chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
I like how the rain is used as a symbol because it stirs up emotions in the reader that would never be there and the diction around it is excellent. i dislike how the poem does not focus on school and that is the theme of the poem because it truly distracted me. It reads more like angst and a story at points. This review is for the Review marathon, linked in my profile.
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Great, truly brilliant. It is always is :-D Nice work! I love poetry about the rain!
scarletrosethorn chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
this is a great story/poem! i loved it! i think it so describs the natural rainy day at school!