I don't have an account on this website so sorry this is just a guest review but this is great!
I think you did really good with their relationship and also how their characters act without making it two weird(I mean... they're horny teenagers so...)
So yeah, great work, I dont know how this is compared to other stuff published here because I mainly read fanfiction and at least compared to them you're like a thousand times better than 80% of the writers on fanfiction net which isn't that difficult but meh.
Still liked this :)
Cya

Awww this was so sweet! :'D

another awesome story.I lovvvee it

Adorable .

nice. this was very cute, made me smile. plus the awkward moments were so funny

This story is so cute! I disagree with the other review that says you should split it into chapters- I think the scenes flowed together really well. Anyway, this was a fun read, and I look forward to checking out your other stories!

Very, very cute! I love this story!

Love!

Good job! I love how this is angst free, although you do have the I'm in love with him but I don't think he loves me thing going you manage to keep it nice and light hearted which really works for this piece. I do think the personalities of the characters could do with a bit more description because to be honest, I find them a bit bland and unremarkable, of course oneshots don't really allow for much character development but if you extend it a bit and add more interactions between them then I think it will help a fair bit. Not much else to say really, a really nice piece )

awwww! this is so cute! i love it! :)

Aw. :) Such a sweet story! I liked that she "promised herself she would never be that girl. You know, the one that falls irrevocably in love with her best friend" and yet, there she was... in love with her best friend. :) Also, the whole truth-or-dare thing? Adorable! (And I THOUGHT he was staring at her ass in the store, but I'm glad you confirmed it. It was kind of nice that he got caught and blushed though, you know? Even if just to show that Kelli isn't the only one in like and always blushing. I hate it when it's unbalanced like that and only one person ever gets caught/embarrassed... I don't know why. But there you go.) Basically, it was sweet and adorable and I really liked it. :) Nice job!

Aw that was sweet.

Cute, very cute story. It makes you happy. Keep writing

i love this! so cute and i love that Dylan was the darer, i did not expect that )

Such a cute story! Aww