I thought there'd be a transplant and he would say he loved him ... This is.. Not what I expected.

Okay. The sex scene reminded me of how it would actually go in the real world. Great job! I understand your...loss of dignity as the same thing happened to me when i first wrote an explicit scene.

I hate you. I hate you but I have decided this is one of the best stories that i have ever read, so thank you for writing it.

I would like to thank you for sharing your story. However, I would have appreciated a tag warning like character death or tragedy, if I had known Willow was going to die I wouldn't have read this honestly. In the future, please label accordingly so that readers with emotional triggers are aware.

Omfg i cried so much so much D: like full on whole 2 chapters

I just had to say (write) it again I HATE U ! this story sucks! Y willow? :'/
...Its 3 in the morning how am I suppose to go 2 go to sleep now after reading that ?!
...Ur an excellent writer , I loved both willow and jace ( I just really hate ur ending )
Do u think u could write a different ending ?

U shitter! I hate this story so much !
...but I love it 2 :/
I really wish Willow didn't die :'(

Wow just holy shit this story was great never before I've I cared so much for a character in a story sinse fatal frame 2 and man the feels are all over the place also I must thank you for not doing that hole everything worked out in the end but still really wish Will and Jace got to spend more time together.

Thank you for breaking my heart. I don't usually cry over stories from fictionpress, actually, I think this was the first one.

-fav this-

...fuck you, jace. fuck you for wasting the time that you could've had with will. and fuck you will for leaving everyone. fuck everyone.

wow i have not read a story in a long time that made me cry
i loved it thank you

WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?!

Damn it this is the second story where one of the main characters die from some disease, in a row! God damn it I need a fluffy gay story now!

freak!
i freakin' love this!
when i read your notes a couple of chapters back about will and jace's relationship being...complicated.i somehow had an idea that things could turn out this way...
i guess just like the others, i wish they could have been together a bit spending more time with jace and even anna...the three of them being a family...
i'm also happy that i finally heard jace said "i love you" to will wherein he truly meant it and not just some sort of sarcastic remark of brotherly love...
thanks so much for this!i definitely love this!

I hate you I hate you I HATE you! Why does it end like that? I was sure it is going to end well; hoping for some miracle throughout the last few chapters. *sniffle* But I love your story all the same.