Reviews for Don't Look Back
Swordy McSwordy chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
Yeah, marathon games of hide and seek can be terrifying.
CRAZEDbySUGAR chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
With paranoia this goes through my mind a lot (except for the bit with Mama's room...that is not possibleXD)
The puncuation through out this piece helped emphasize certain words :) In the future perhaps you could use some words in CAPS LOCK to make emphasize the words you want to more...perhaps like STAY AWAY! instead of Stay away. which sounds a bit wimpy...
all in all I love this :D Keep up the awesome work and I hope to read more from you in the future :)
stargirllovesyou chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
What the hell?
KingCobraLove chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
Woah. Freaky, but really cool. I kinda wonder who "they" are, but from the pont of view it seems as if they are the Boogey Man and other child nighttime fears. Very well written, good job!
deets1 chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
This is what happens to me in those few moments when I'm just waking up from sleep and I swear there's a huge spider crawling towards me. I'm not even sure if the last time was real or not (probably wasn't), but I was out of there too fast to even contemplate going back to check.


scariest shit ever.

I'm sure yours is worse though, since you're fully awake...

anyway, you captured the feelings well. I like it.

Ink Kisses chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
you've somehow managed to get inside a younger me's head. thats EXACTLY how i used to feel... and still do, occasionally. This is really good!
ChrisDrewRocksMyWorld124 chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
I used to be like that. Buring myself under my covers. Closing all doors. And using the hallway light as a nightlight. But one day for some unknown reason i stopped being afraid. Now i love horror movies-especially zombie ones :)the gorier the better
Bloody Red Moon chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
Powerful stuff you've written there. I wonder what it would be like to believe in monsters again...

Serendipital chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Nightmares, dude. Nightmares.
rsgNY chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
Awesome and well written. I get kinda like that when I'm halfway between asleep and awake, which is when I usually write best. Coincedence? Most likely not.

Good job!


The Catfish Kid chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Wow, this is a really great, strong piece of writing. I really like the ending in particular. I dunno, I guess I just like endings that leave it open to your imagination. :D
mdl97 chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Great! I was wondering, what is the message behind this poem. Check out my stories :)
Mandisaurus-rex chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Ahh my gosh, I so relate to this. This is totally what goes on in my mind pretty much everyday. You wrote this really well too, I loved the pacing and the open ending :).

Great work!

Bob-The-Rock chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
hehehe, your welcome. about the support things, i mean...

you see things? wow, you're crazier than i thought...

i hate feeling like that. it's really annoying. if you want more support things, then you have just put how i feel in those situations into words. i suck at putting things into words...

i was gonna say something else. what was it...?



oh YEAH! the title. why'd you call it scarred mind? it's like the person isn't innocent anymore. you know, thinking wrong and all that. mind telling me why that's the title?

okay, instead of you being sarcastic cos of my support again, ill just say that it's an interesting writing style, 'kay?