Reviews for The Perfect Woman
smoke another grin chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
It was all a great buildup, and I thought it was going deeper, hoping for an ending where you trash all those ideas of perfection, but the ending you had ruined it a bit for me. Because it meant that the poem wasn't ironic, it was really meant to be a description of the perfect woman? It was clever, and really good right until the last two lines. But ah well.
Rhocar chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
hey Yorik, are you trippin, she doesn't exist, but well summed up, don't forget perfect can also equal boring, fantastic piece though, now us women need to be one for a perfect man lol.
Thoth Tarot chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
and yet i know kung fu! its great! i love it! only one minor comment this line, My voice is like an orgasm in your ears. came a little too early on for me in the context of the words around it which was all disney like. i don't know if that was the purpose of it, but i would have like it a little latter with the rest of the more adult themes.