|Reviews for Love|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
I like this. It's a really cute ancd sweet description of love and also original especially with that first stanza. Nicely done! I also like how you ended it with the word love all on its own.
The only thing is you capitalized each stanza, but you didn't punctuate them at all which seemed odd to me. I would punctuate them so each stanza is a sentence. Even if you don't want to use the period to end the sentence some semi-colons and commas would definitely work.
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