|Reviews for history of architecture and black tea|
| D. Cowman chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
You slipped in the nonsensically addicting nature of insomnia, and I dig that.
"carving a statue out of my arms and legs", I dig that, too.
Do you drink coffee, or just tea?
| nobody's dream girl chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
I love the last line of the poem
and the imagery is simply amazing.)
| toinfinity chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
breakfast, that dumb-eyed block of burnt lips and black tea.
she keeps a museum in the bags of her eyes
and she's too fascinated to sleep ever again. - I loved that part (:
What really caught me first was the title. it was just really interesting. anyway, uhhm, i love how you string words together. my words are flat out, bleh. but yours...i liked the way you wrote one thing, the words so beautiful when read in that context, but clearly meant something else.
a few times i had to read it over to understand what it meant, which was good too. gives you something to think about.