Reviews for Rabbit
classic violet chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
Incredible, as always. I love it.
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
very nice use of a metaphor
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
I like how you tied in the rabbit to each stanza. It connected the piece well, but wasn't redundant.

I also liked "the corner of our eyelids" that was a great description. The ending was good too.