|Reviews for Sacred oaths and hair cutting|
| Margaret DeLucia chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
Great poem. Could you check out my stories sometime? I could use some reviews ;)
| fatbird33 chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
what a unique form :) i enjoyed it
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
"meant to caress a boys hair,"...boy's
I really liked the ending. I thought the description of the people after 9/11 was definitely something we all saw. The whole hair thing was interesting. I really liked the format here with the three rules. Though I felt like either a parenthesis or a period would work instead of both.