Reviews for Zip Her Zipper
electrical moon chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
Nice poem! I love the idea of 'dreamscape elopement' and 'spreading svelte flesh across the sheets'. Really should be rated M, though.
FixitfelixJRJRJR chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
Hmm. Might be to easy on the rating... Good poem though, love