Reviews for Artificial
Paseana chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
This is a really good start. I'm definitely going to keep reading. There are a few minor grammer mistakes but it's very good, either than that. Nice job! Paseana
Red-Dream chapter 4 . 2/12/2011
Wow... Well, I suppose I should have expected them to be treated like that. It really hits a chord like you intended. I'm curious as to what their dad is going to do, too. Please, continue. Good story!