You have too few comments on your story. I have just read both of them in one long day. I've not much to say about them at the moment (it's 2.30 in the morning). I have to sleep on them and chew a bit on them. But I really like them a lot. The story of Janek was more precise and detailed, you really took your readers on a journey through his life and his coming of age. A lot of the feelings an events I found were very recognisable. I'm too sleepy to say anything intelligent at the moment, but I'm very glad I read these stories. Thank your for writing.

I really, really love your writing. It's hard to stop reading, honestly compelling. I'll spend hours to finish a story, and then be really disappointed again. Just, thank you very much for posting this. I appreciate it very, very much. I honestly don't get this sucked into stories that often, and-well, it's just a really nice change. Thanks again!

I must say that is the longest and mist detailed prologue I have ever read ! I loved it though, I'm excited to start in on the rest of the chapters.