Reviews for Carousel
this wild abyss chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
I liked the extended metaphor you used in this piece because I felt that it fit the emotions and scene to an advantage.

I did think that the poem was unclear at places. "Yet forever will not be together" didn't make a lot of sense given the context, and the vague reference left me confused rather than intrigued.

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