Reviews for Brave and Loyal Knight
Aiarada Alyan chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
Your rhythm and your concept are both very well done in this poem. You had an excellent rhyme scheme, and the rhythm went along with that beautifully, so that the poem was fun to read, instead of tedious (as some poems can be). I also liked how your concept seems like a child could understand it, but it also has a deeper meaning. Your metaphors were very effective as well. Great poem!