Reviews for Headphones
Mercyette chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
This is a review for the Review Game's Review Marathon. Check us out; there's a link in my profile!

I especially liked the unique direction you took in this particular legend. In all the others, other people were responsible for the deaths of family or even themselves. This one was especially interesting seeing as it was the MC's fault. Nice change.

I would have liked to see more in this story, too. How exactly did the mother get hurt? Did someone else harm her or was it just an accident? What ended up happening? I think this story would be much stronger if you added more detail.

Reading on!
Melissa chapter 2 . 9/2/2011
Now this was a great ending! LOVE YOUR URBAN LEGANDS PLEASE KEEP THEM UP! (sorry for caps my bad) Sounds like she has some awsome headphones too hehe
Hosena chapter 2 . 2/10/2011
Wow, I didn't suppose that this is a horror one.

I think it would be great if you write this as a long chapter story. Just curious about the whole story ;)