Reviews for Haunted City |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, I know it may be so random, but I suggest you to join a writing contest about werewolf story. I read your story and you can probably win the contest. Why not try first. Here is the link: bit. ly/ 2Yr0vLC |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) I vaguely remember Toby and Jericho- they were from another story you had that was a WIP if I remember correctly. Btw your author note was in an odd place. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am following on Patreon of course but I just had to chime in and say.. they never got around to cleaning the counter! Hahah |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had a wonderful time spam reading all 10 chapters since getting to work. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story and I definitely look forward to more! |
![]() ![]() I remember reading this story a few years back , and i didnt understand much. Now i atleast got to ch 3 before becoming completely lost. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had suspected the wolf was Eli. They really know how to hit each other where it hurts emotionally. Grow a pair Eli and stop being an ass to Jack cause he doesn't deserve it. I can't help but wonder what will happen now knowing there is so much interest in Athena's spell book. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, poor boys.. I'm very much enjoying the drama though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Van helsing guys are interesting :D loving the story so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww, I liked the sweetness at the end :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() So exciting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story so far! I really like the characters, very life-like :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bah are you too chicken to admit you've caught the feels Eli? Yeah Jack is kinda dumb for doing that when he probably is going to attract the wrong kind of attention now.. but it's definitely a mistake to ditch his ass. Now what is going to happen? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tsk tsk Eli, no need to go prying into Jack's business. haha Will we get to see more of Sarah because she is a riot. I forget how much of this story came out before you started revisions. Looking forward to seeing what happens next cause I totally can't recall (if you even got this far the last time). Eli is a feisty bastard haha |
![]() ![]() ![]() The man is a beast.. literally. ;) I am enjoying this rewrite though tbh I can't recall much about the first version. |
![]() ![]() Loved it |