Reviews for Haunted City
NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 12 . 2/28/2012
ooOOOoo! i haven't read this for a while an now there are all these new chapters :-)

great job. flawless on the grammar and spelling, so here's a shout out to the betas! great job, guys!

i love this story. i'm really glad eli is getting rounded out some. i also evilly like how much of a shitshow clusterfuck jack's life is. :-D

thanks for sharing!
i-wish-i-had-wings chapter 12 . 2/12/2012
nice getting some more background info on eli, interesting that he's a rich kid p nice to see the two of them getting closer )

i hope toby doesn't get into too much trouble, i like him!

a bar that jack will like, huh? i wonder what that will be like?
Domi chapter 12 . 2/9/2012
Thanks for the new chapter, HC is just awesome! Nice to hear a bit about Eli's family background, would be interesting to learn a bit about Ajax' as well. Like what happened to his parents, why was he brought up by his grandmother?
Social Deviance chapter 12 . 2/7/2012
i love this story. it was a good chapter i liked having some insight into eli's past. ty
plumblossom chapter 12 . 2/7/2012
Okay, this chapter is like a birthday christmas hanukkah graduation baby shower present.

Everything about it - the byplay between Eli and Ajax, the backstory fo Ajax, the appearance of Tobuas, every little thing.

I can see you didn't decide whether to go with my origin story for Tobias.

More Toby in the future! Yay!

thank you, as always.
coocoo chapter 12 . 2/7/2012
WHAT

no bottom!eli sex scene?

WHYYYY. WHYYYYY.
FerSureMaybe chapter 11 . 1/24/2012
I'm so stoked this story is back, you don't even understand! It's going great!
QuickSilverSand chapter 11 . 1/16/2012
cool chapter...please update soon
Sofia chapter 11 . 1/16/2012
oh wow, thanks for that chapter. you are such an amazing author I just love reading your stories. can't wait for the next part. your tattoos look awesome by the way.
i-wish-i-had-wings chapter 11 . 1/16/2012
aww, eli! he was just so ADORABLE in this chapter xD so vulnerable *-* so they're going to try out a more serious relationship, i wonder how that will work out? werewolves are a posessive bunch, aren't they? i must say i find the thought of ajax topping an alpha male a bit strange, but it'll probably be hot xD

since i forgot to mention this before; i'm really curious about that thief, but didn't jack have files from the book on it?

i want to know EVERYTING, it's just so mysterious, it has me completely hooked p
i-wish-i-had-wings chapter 10 . 1/16/2012
it must be my lucky day; two chapters in one day? i'm seriously addicted to HC *-*

nooo, not archie! he was just such a funny kind of sweet person, though it is some serious sh*t going on and his death kinda proved that. i love how they handled his death, and that slip of paper, so damn funny xD

so is katharina genuinly interested in jack or is she just trying to win him over from eli and control him? also, i don't remember; is jack bi or gay? anyways, she creeps me out big time, yuck!
prostock69 chapter 11 . 1/16/2012
Ch. 11: Totally awesome chapter! So happy that Eli and Jack are now "exclusive" and that Katharina didn't get her claws too far into Jack.
Laie chapter 11 . 1/16/2012
Nooooooo! I loved macho!alpha!Eli! He can't bottom! He can't! *cries tears of betrayal* no man is 100% macho...

Rofl XD
dfgh.lp chapter 11 . 1/16/2012
EEE, awesome chapter :D

Loved it! Can't wait for more
plumblossom chapter 11 . 1/15/2012
This is wonderful stuff. I'm so glad they had this conversation, though nobody should think the worst is even beginnign to be over yet.

Katharina's probably going to be mad, but what can she do about it?

I'm glad Eli drove the vampire crap out of him. Vampires are boring.
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