| Reviews for Haunted City |
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   Ben Tramsami chapter 11 . 1/15/2012 What? A second chapter up in one day? WOOOOO! You are just amazing, dear author! You leave me thinking I'm going to have to deal with a cliffhanger for the next several days, but then you post this amazingness! And then Eli comes back! God, I love Eli. I love him even more when he's bantering with Ajax or having some sexy-time with him. You never disappoint, dear author. I truly appreciate that as a reader. Thanks for the fantastic work! Keep it up! |
| Ben Tramsami chapter 10 . 1/15/2012 AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! CLIFFHANGER! Woo! This keeps getting better and better! Come rescue Ajax, Eli! But if that's not what happens next, that's okay, because you have failed to disappoint me, dear author. Keep up the fantastic work! |
| Celestialuna chapter 9 . 1/1/2012 Good chapter. |
| NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 9 . 1/1/2012 awww, awww ,awwwwwwww! poor ajax. everyone loves the snarky bastard asshole. eli returns! thanks for sharing! *tosses you cookies for writing stamina* happy new year! |
| NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 8 . 1/1/2012 yay! new chapter and new characters! i love archibald! please tell me that the van helsing society is going to have some steampunk elements in it. that would be awesome! brilliant as always! thanks for sharing! |
| BlackNoSugar chapter 9 . 12/29/2011 Wow, this is great :) I mean... This has to be the best supernatural story I've read! ;) Thank you for writing this, I can't wait for the update! |
| i-wish-i-had-wings chapter 9 . 12/26/2011 god, eli sure is an ass! he made me sooo pissed off p i'm glad ajax isn't a pushover, i hope he hurt eli! aww, i felt so sorry for ajax, i hope he gets another supernatural friend soon, someone who can help him. i wonder what sarah will say about the window xD |
| Laie chapter 9 . 12/26/2011 Ajax is so f*cking cute! *hugs him* he got me all teary eyed at the end of this chapter! HAPPY NEW YEAR! :D |
| 0nyx-Rose chapter 9 . 12/26/2011 Every time I finish the new chapter out, I try to favourite the story, even though it's already on my favourites. I frickin' love this story. It's got everything, magic, mystery, hot guys, hot guys having sex and PLOT! |
| Chibko chapter 9 . 12/26/2011 Aw they're so aggravating it's cute. But not. And I'm not sure if I want to slap Eli or shake him silly. Poor Jack. I hope we'll get to read another chapter soon. :) |
| QuickSilverSand chapter 9 . 12/26/2011 aw...poor ajax |
| Shamalan Grey chapter 8 . 12/21/2011 Thank you for explaining the deja vu thing. I kept getting more and more confused the further I got into this chapter. I kept thinking 'I've read this somewhere.' -Shama |
| LyingOutLoud chapter 8 . 12/21/2011 Love the parallels to real-world (anti terror) laws and accompanying bureaucracy in this chapter. Intended or happy coincidence? Either way, great story, great chapter! |
| Sunday chapter 8 . 12/20/2011 Thank you for updating so fast. I just love this story, can't wait for the next chapter and hope Eli will be back! |
| Celestialuna chapter 8 . 12/20/2011 Good chapter. |