Reviews for Haunted City
Ben Tramsami chapter 10 . 1/15/2012
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! CLIFFHANGER!

Woo! This keeps getting better and better! Come rescue Ajax, Eli! But if that's not what happens next, that's okay, because you have failed to disappoint me, dear author.

Keep up the fantastic work!
Celestialuna chapter 9 . 1/1/2012
Good chapter.
NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 9 . 1/1/2012
awww, awww ,awwwwwwww! poor ajax.

everyone loves the snarky bastard asshole. eli returns!

thanks for sharing! *tosses you cookies for writing stamina* happy new year!
NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 8 . 1/1/2012
yay! new chapter and new characters! i love archibald! please tell me that the van helsing society is going to have some steampunk elements in it. that would be awesome!

brilliant as always! thanks for sharing!
BlackNoSugar chapter 9 . 12/29/2011
Wow, this is great :) I mean... This has to be the best supernatural story I've read! ;) Thank you for writing this, I can't wait for the update!
i-wish-i-had-wings chapter 9 . 12/26/2011
god, eli sure is an ass! he made me sooo pissed off p i'm glad ajax isn't a pushover, i hope he hurt eli!

aww, i felt so sorry for ajax, i hope he gets another supernatural friend soon, someone who can help him. i wonder what sarah will say about the window xD
Laie chapter 9 . 12/26/2011
Ajax is so f*cking cute! *hugs him* he got me all teary eyed at the end of this chapter!

HAPPY NEW YEAR! :D
0nyx-Rose chapter 9 . 12/26/2011
Every time I finish the new chapter out, I try to favourite the story, even though it's already on my favourites.

I frickin' love this story.

It's got everything, magic, mystery, hot guys, hot guys having sex and PLOT!
Chibko chapter 9 . 12/26/2011
Aw they're so aggravating it's cute. But not. And I'm not sure if I want to slap Eli or shake him silly. Poor Jack. I hope we'll get to read another chapter soon. :)
QuickSilverSand chapter 9 . 12/26/2011
aw...poor ajax
Shamalan Grey chapter 8 . 12/21/2011
Thank you for explaining the deja vu thing. I kept getting more and more confused the further I got into this chapter. I kept thinking 'I've read this somewhere.'

-Shama
LyingOutLoud chapter 8 . 12/21/2011
Love the parallels to real-world (anti terror) laws and accompanying bureaucracy in this chapter. Intended or happy coincidence? Either way, great story, great chapter!
Sunday chapter 8 . 12/20/2011
Thank you for updating so fast. I just love this story, can't wait for the next chapter and hope Eli will be back!
Celestialuna chapter 8 . 12/20/2011
Good chapter.
QuickSilverSand chapter 8 . 12/20/2011
cool, update soon please!
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