|Reviews for Haunted City|
| crystal chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
This is really interesting so far, love the supernatural element. XD Will be waiting for more. :D
| jayanx chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Loved it before, and still love it now. The imagery is so visceral it gives me such a vivid portrait of the characters and the situation that they are in. Love the start of the interaction between Ajax and the mystery boy. It is a great opening, and I can't wait to read more.
| thatonecat chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
What have I been missing out! Oh my gosh. D: Just from this chapter, I'm anticipating for more already. lol! I'm pretty creeped out by the mohawk guy and wonder how he's gonna play in the plot. I'm already afraid for the main character. Seeing the dead will have me jumping off a bridge long ago. Now I just wished I knew what happened before you removed the story. Oh the painful (but worthy) wait. xD
Another great writing! Good luck with the next chapters!
| EndeavorThroughTheMist chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Ajax and Eli are back! Yay! I was so sad when you took this story down but I'm glad that you're taking the time to re-write it and make it better. P.S. I love your style sheets. I think it's so cool that you do that for all your characters.
| seraphofreverie chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
Intriguing! :D albeit i have a weakness for the supernatural...
this sounds like it will be fun story to write