This is really good! I can see why you have so many reviews. Your take on the occult is fascinating!

This has been really interesting so far, good job! I love how you can talk about the legal area so knowledgeably. Really gives your character depth.

I love your world building. So much so that I kept on going even though I shy away from the more he-man type characters. Plus, it actually was perfect for Eli, given his past and how he's dealt with his furry little problem. Anywho, I'd love to read more stories set in this universe. I liked the shorts you did for Toby and Jericho. :-)

That was Epic!

So happy to come back to find this completed. Re-read the whole thing from the start and then greatly enjoyed the finish. That last line is hilarious. Love those guys.
I wish there were a sequel where we saw how they worked out full moons - for example, the wolf's behaviour the last time was quite interesting. He seemed intent to get to Ajax, but didn't really seem hostile in the room. I also really hope our young law student follows up on his civil rights impulses with the bureaucracy of the Van Helsings, along with his studies into magic and necromancy.

In any case, thank you so much for coming back to complete this story, and posting it all in the first place. I greatly enjoyed it.

Good luck with your future projects!

Really great story, i loved it.

Loved it! Thank you so much for sharing :) xx

If I read another story where some fucking asshole spells "lighting" as "lightening," I'm going to stick pins into their eyes and douse their more vital appendages with a generous amount of bleach.
Lightning. Lightning lightning LIGHTNING. Jesus-FUCK.
Oh, but good story though. By all means, keep going.

Oh really well written I could have read that even without the smut
Now to see what else you've got to read :)
I'm giving you a fav author, story and a follow

Awesome story!read in one go, just could not put it down. Thankyou

the ending was perfect

This was amazing! It was probably one of the most creative and well-written stories I've had the pleasure of reading in quite a while.

*Favorited*

I really enjoyed all of this story. There's not much else to say really, great characters and an interesting world, I just wish it could have gone on longer : )
Thanks for sharing and I'll definitely check out your published work.

Loving this little gem that I appeared to have stumbled across. Eli is a great character, I'm enjoying his dialogue (he seems to have an odd way of phrasing things which I'm enjoying ) and his fashion sense. Jax is interesting too, in a different kind of way because he's the narrator. I thought I'd find the short sections frustrating, but they don't detract at all so far. I'm looking forward to seeing where this ends up, but for now its brill so thanks.

Oh man it's over? :) I'm glad Athena loved her brother enough to separate them forever(?).

It's cute how Eli thought Jack was going to dump him now that the crisis was over. Silly Eli has no faith in himself or in Jack's feelings.

Thanks for completing this story. Oh and I'm looking forward to the day I can pre-order Art Criticism. :)