Loved it loved it! Obviously you know you have some wonderful talent for story-telling, and I'm so glad you shared at least some of it here. I have't checked yet, but I am keeping my fingers crossed that your other stories on this site have been finished because it would break my heart to start them, get pulled in by your wonderful style, and not have an ending, so I won't start any unfinished ones. But - all those that are complete, I'll definitely be diving into! Plus, I'll check out what you've published, and I hope you're still writing slash!

I didn't realise it had been years till I read that last comment. Its nice to have something constant when so much has been changing! read this a couple of times now and its always been brilliant. I love the character depth and the cuddling ;)
And also an ending that is also continuous.
Mr Fox reminds me of Bill Nighy, him as Mr Blunt with red eyes.

The only thing that kinda got me lost about the story was that it didn't really have any background information like explaining the whole supernatural world but I did love it, it was highly hilarious and entertaining and I sorta wish there was a sequel

Keep up the good work :)

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! That was so so so so incredibly wonderful! I'm really really REALLY glad you came back from hiatus to finish this! I was such a big fan of this when I first discovered it. Then the dark days of hiatus came... And I mourned the ending I would never read, considering most hiatuses never end...

But then you returned! And there was good in the world again!

Thanks for finishing this. It was really interesting, fun to read, gloriously sexy, and lovely all around.

I wish you well on your continued writing journey!

Yay, I am so glad I stuck around for the finish, even re-read it a few times to catch up between updates. Great ending and great story.

That was such a sweet (and sexy) last chapter! I always look forward to your stories, and you're one of the few reasons I'd join Tumblr haha can't wait to read more of your work in the future, and just know you're one of my favorite authors on here!

I'm rarely ever satisfied at the ending of a book, because I feel it could go on more, but this was perfect and I love it so much. I'm going to reread the whole story again right now.:) it's definitely one of my favorites, and I absolutely love your writing. I would definitely buy anything you published (if I had money;)).

Still reading. Keep writing! Thanks.

hey, I've pretty much been following this story from the 1st time it appeared and check pretty much every few days if there's and update.
I love it.
thanks for updating :)

Finding you had posted another chapter made my day. I love this story so much and am a bit sad there is only one chapter left. I love these characters so much. In fact, I love all your writing. I would like to echo what a few people said, regarding publishing ebooks. I would pay money to own a copy of Haunted City and Juicy Fruit.

I'm so glad you started writing this story again! It's definitely one of the best I've read in a while. I was missing Eli in that last scene, so I hope he's okay too.

If you're looking to transition away from fictionpress, I'd suggest looking into getting your stories published. Your writing is absolutely good enough. I write for LT3, but there are dozens of other options out there.

I'm not sure I ever said hi in this story, but I am since long waiting for this story to finish and I am very happy that you do. To be honest, I also quietly wait for Treasured to be finished. I very much liked Juicy Fruit and Art Criticism. And I always like reading Every Finger a Fish Hook. Well, I like all your stories really. It would be nice if you would publish these stories so I could buy them. They disappear and I dont know where to. If you do publish, please let me know.

That was awesome! It's a shame that Athena is officially dead after all that time, but at least the curse is broken. Which other sites would you move to because I'd love to keep updated with your incredible work.

Wheres Eli? Im sorry you get radio silence, poor ppl that cant afford buying books all the time appreciate your posting on free sites.

Still here, and I still love the world you've created in San Francisco. Even if these guys story ends maybe we can still them again in someone else's story? If you do choose to transfer to a different site please let me know so I can keep up with your stories.
Thanks
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