Reviews for Haunted City
midnight41 chapter 14 . 7/24/2012
Finally! Thanks for the update and I can't wait for the next one!
Sundavar chapter 14 . 7/24/2012
Yay! We meet the infamous Jerry at last! I hope he can help Jack with this curse, and maybe he can find himself a wayward familiar along the way!

Thanks for updating! You are an amazing writer, keep up the great work!
plumblossom chapter 14 . 7/24/2012
Kat's interesting: it's hard to tell if she is telling any truth at all about her motives, and Eli is just excessively suspicious of her, or what. And this new glimpse of Jericho is interesting. Eli doesn't trust Tody, but he can't, can he, considering that he works for somebody awful now - but I figure he never did.

That last line is a really fine life philosophy.
i-wish-i-had-wings chapter 14 . 7/24/2012
i was just thinking about this story the other day ) nice to see jack and eli getting along, i hope it lasts. jericho seems like a really interesting character.
Sundavar chapter 13 . 7/23/2012
Very interesting! I really want to see more of Toby and hope we get to meet jerico soon! Poor little kitty needs to be saved by jerico befor it's too late!

Thanks for posting this story! You are an amazing writer, keep up the great work!
tell it to the sky chapter 13 . 6/25/2012
i love Ajax and Eli, and i cant wait to read more.
Zhandra01 chapter 13 . 4/10/2012
Hi *waves*

I just found your story and I’m have to say I'm just loving it. I hope you will write more soon, because I’m very interested how it will go on.

Good luck & happy muses

Zhan
furthestcoast chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
I feel like a moron, but I didn't even realize until now that I've been half following your stories on adultfanfiction, and half on here. So, to make my life a lot easier, I'll just follow you on here. ;D

I absolutely love all of your work, and I pretty much think you're brilliant.

Keep it up. ]
Moonshine chapter 13 . 3/2/2012
Please, please, update soon, I hate cliffhangers. I'm so addicted to this story, how many chapters are you planning to write?
NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 13 . 3/1/2012
omfg cliffhanger.

great job. i really like toby. can we keep him? i have the feeling you are going to kill him off at some point.
i-wish-i-had-wings chapter 13 . 3/1/2012
so toby is protecting ajax from his oh so mysterious master? i'm starting to get really curious about that guy! what exactly is it he wants? i hope toby doesn't get hurt by either side.
plumblossom chapter 13 . 2/29/2012
Congratulations on the grant and geting paid and your work in the art space paying off!

Toby apparently has the ability to front okay when he has to. I've been thinking of him as kind of a miserable little waif, but I realize now that that's a rather small part of him.

I like that Ajax tells Eli he's not afraid of him. I kind of think that even though the ante has been upped and the plot has thickened and all that, nobody would think that he's "circling the drain" anymore. - still highly endangered, but no longer incapable of acting in his own behalf.
WantsRevenge21 chapter 13 . 2/29/2012
I'm torn, it's really nice to see the plot moving along,but I also miss the great sex scenes.

Congratulations on the good news.
jayanx chapter 13 . 2/29/2012
Loving the new developments, I just keep getting sucked deeper and deeper into their world.
Ben Tramsami chapter 13 . 2/29/2012
WOO! Another excellent chapter! Have I told you how much I love this story? It's freaking fantastic! Keep up the fabulous-ness, dear author!
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