Reviews for Night and Day
Archia chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
I think that both of these are so good, but the first one is truly beautiful. I don't completely understand the second one but I still like it.
Raebie chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
Oops, I missed one.

I like this. It's very simple, but beautiful. Great work!
sophiesix chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
This sounds lovely. i love teh image of the moon so similar to the white rose. teh pacific giving the new sun to Asia... i'm guessing that means its moving west, and hence setting? but that wouldn't be a new sun though... hm... rather thought provoking!
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Aw sweet :)

What about when the Americas give it to the Pacific? 'Recycle this well'?
SirScott chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
Pretty good. I like how you do these.

SirScott
nickyO chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
I liked the way you mixed the personal with the historical in these two pieces. *Applause
William G. Thorne chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
excellent haikus. I like the idea of the moon in the summer, during midsummers night festivles I attend the moon always seems to have a magical like quality to it, its very soothing.

I am taking a shot at the second haiku. Asia is the land of the rising sun. perhaps that is why the pacific gave the sun to asia. am I correct or am I completely off? haha

-William
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
I liked the first haiku, but I didn't understand the second completely.