Reviews for Keep on Avoiding
Campion41 chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
You have some really unique ideas. I think they're smart! Very interesting.
SomeRandomScribbles chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Great piece :) Sometimes the rhythmn didn't always flow that well, but the language is really good, and I like the concept - something similar is happening to me at the moment, so I can really connect with this piece.
Ice Bubble chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
I love it! Checkmate! You have an awesome way with words! Keep writing!