Reviews for Innocence No Longer
FixitfelixJRJRJR chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
The title makes this piece fairly sad. I liked the line that said, "telling me sweet everythings" well done.
svuobsessor chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
That was great. Breathtaking actually. You are very talented.
ReaverTam chapter 7 . 2/20/2011
I love the way you use words.
Oracle of Destiny chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
I really loved this poem as it's so attentive to beautiful detail. It not only focuses on love but it also focuses on the somewhat tragic side of love if you know what I mean. It's kinda like as if you are reminsicing over the times that you shared with a loved one, but you often feel pangs of regret from time to time. You sure have a talented way with words - excellent work! :D
SomeRandomScribbles chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Absolutely beautiful. Your use of language is brilliant.
samhus chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
wow. This is really good, I LOVE the part where it says paralyze my lungs...Its so awesome. I love how the last line just ties in the reason of the peom. Its really good, nicely written.