Reviews for Without a Coat
bewareoftheturtle chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
Hi, I really liked this poem too. The way you describe yourself is so interesting. And the end. You always end with a great line. Its like an exclamation point. LOL hope i described that ok.
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
great poem! i was worried that it was going to be cliche, but you did a great job steering away from that.