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This is my go-to book that I always read whenever I need something sweet to cheer me up and for a year now I haven't been able to read it and it always breaks my heart. I understand your reasons for this—plagiarism is really frustrating—but I'm going crazy without this story. I will always remember Cade and Conner's lovable, dysfunctional relationship. Thank you for creating a story I love so deeply that has had me hooked for the past four years. Should you ever be open to sending your fans copies or posting the story online again or publishing it, I will be the first in line for it.

I like where this story is going. :) good work.

Wait, where did the rest of the chapters GO?!

BEST STORY EVER! I just love it, tho you broke my heart several times there! but this is still fabulous! Love it!
-Alice

DIE

Read it all at one go because I had to find out what happened to these two in the end. I wished you had given this story a bittersweet ending though - let me maintain that Cade did not deserve this kind of forgiveness over and over again. Ha.

This relationship is way too volatile and prone to combustions :P They're just too lucky to have Fate playing right into their hands every damn time. This is one couple that I'd hated and loved at the same time.

It'll never end, eh? That said, you've done something quite amazing: You've created a story where every single major character (with the possible exceptions of Lynn and Spencer... maybe) is a pretty horrible human being, and yet I *still* need to know what happens to them! I've never before become so invested in the lives of characters that I also wanted to slap silly for having no sense of self-preservation or how to function in a relationship. It's completely appropriate that you titled the story "Jerks," and if you tweaked the plot in a few key ways, you'd actually have a hilarious parody of the soap opera-like drama that is high school. And yes, I do mean that as a compliment, my friend.

This time I was shouting this out loud: "Please, for the love of God, just shove him in the pool."

I actually said this out loud: "Please, for the love of God, just punch him and walk away." I've kind of wanted her to do that for about half of the story. The fact that I reacted in such a way speaks not only to what a terrible person Cade is, but also your ability to draw your readers into the lives of your characters, which is quite strong.

Wait, wait, wait... hold the phone. You're a fellow band geek? Hooray! I love finding more of my own kind. I don't know if you've read anything by DancingChaChaFruit, but she and I were in the same marching band for four years in college. (She was also my roommate/housemate for two). Anyway, just wanted to share that bit of happiness.

Holy crap. Most. Dysfunctional. Couple. Ever. It's times like this that I really, really don't miss being a teenager at all. Such drama.

You should probably change the rating of this story to M, just FYI. I don't personally have a problem with anything you've written (hooray for safe sex!), but some people might want an M rating for this type of scene.

I'm really enjoying your story so far. The plot is entertaining, and the characters are endearing. I just wanted to suggest that you take a look at how you use the word "whenever," since you sometimes use it instead of "when." I don't mean to offend you; it's just something I noticed. Anyway, lovely story thus far!.

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