i reread the story a few weeks back and i have to say truthfully i cringed at certain parts of the story especially in the later bc its written badly but bc of cade.

the story title really didnt do justice to cade. its more appropriate as ' The Biggest Lying Jerk'.that describe him to the t.

ah, this sound so bitter but reading about cade's repeated lying and cheating had that effect.

even more when conner accepted him back.

not saying i dont love happily ever after bc i do.

nevertheless, good writing!

I sort of find these characters unrealistic. Like when Cade says "the hot people always win." WTF? Who says that in real life?

I love this story so much. It's one of the best stories I have read on FP. You're a great author!

Good story

I am sorry but my phone sent the last review, and I know it looked confusing. But wat I was saying is I think she should get prego and be faced with the fact that she knows Cade would drop out of school and help her. And she could also maybe get a new job offer and she knows if they find out then they might fire her. Sorry I just like the idea of her getting pregnant, lol. I loved every minute of this story and I will be happy awaiting for the sequel.

I cant believe I am dating this but I think in the sequel conner should get pregnant and be face with the fact that she knows case would drop out sl

Loved Your Story.

Hey im just wondering where can i c the pics? I loved this whole story ive been rereading it and i saw tht u put pics up but where? Im dying to c them and i loved this story btw and im glad u didnt do cade's POV like everyone wanted u to do. It really wud've messed it up. ANYWAYS i wud appreciate i u wud reply soon and im adding u 2 my fav authors. K bye!

LOVE this story! :D

What a roller coaster! At different points in the story I was laughing my head off, almost in tears and punching my bed and screaming in anger. Definitely an awesome story!

I loved that the characters weren't perfect little princesses. They weren't always strong enough to be an individual. They made mistakes. I loved that about them. It made the story more realistic for me; mistakes are what make us human after all.

I absolutely, 100% hate the ending, though. I was really hoping that she wouldn't end up with Cade. The last few chapters were all about establishing that it is possible to move on from lost love and move on with your life. I loved that it wasn't a cliche picture perfect ending where the high school lovers hug or kiss or whatever else. Again, it added to the realism factor and made the story that much more emotional. However, the themes that had built up all through the last chapters were destroyed just in one tiny little section. I think a bittersweet ending would have suited this story much more.

I loved everything else, though. I'll make sure to read the sequel!

I'm sorry but Conner is so annoying

first of all, wtf jacob?jerk!

didnt expect them to have a happy ending after i was half way through the epilogue.

thanks for making this into a happy ending! *happy dance*

i saw ur poll but its already closed!

i want a sequel but sequels can be overwhelming and also dull sometimes if the storyline fail to over-shine or come out below the par the original stories.

if u decided to do the sequel, good luck and i will wait for it.

and if u decided to to cade's story, then it's even better.

a suggestion;why dont u write cade's story with a touch of the future at the later part of the story?so when can have both!

either way, its your story so its really all up to you.

kudos~

OMG! definitely do a sequel instead of cades pov because i could sleep at night without his pov but not without a sequel! and since he is mature and everythign seems like he is a bit less of a jerk now things seem like they could be better! and thank you for writing thing so like poeple like me could go through life easier and having something to look forward to and just destress after long day of life thank you!

well im happy that cade and conner could talk now and that she found herself but i cant help and be sad that they didnt work out and well she graduated and now the story is done sadness oh well it was a good story though ]

nooo one more chapter and damn i didnt see the last line coming but conner is right he did just cheat on anna damn and anna what a bitch why is she soo insentive to his mom leaving him?