Reviews for Special Delivery
Mercyette chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
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Ohh, I like this story this best so far. Very disturbing, but very chilling. Way to go. Not many people could convery that sort of feeling in so few words.

Again, I feel that this story could have been better had specific details been added. How, exactly, did the child go missing? I find it hard to believe that new parents would just let their child out of their sight, for even a little while. It would have been interested to see how he was kidnapped.

Reading on!
melissa chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Why doesntshe get a regular toy at a regular store lol and people need to listen dolls are evil!
HK Shmetty chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Wow, that was really good! I froze at the end in shock. Keep it up.