Reviews for Breaking Free
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
i really liked this one-shot a lot, amazingly written :D
Dandy352 chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
SophieInPink chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
This is like a note to women everywhere. We don't need those jerks. I'm so proud of this girl for getting on with her life!

soph xx
to lazy to log in chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
So sad...bittersweet I guess. Good Job!
valpal4630 chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
aww so cute :)

in the end, where it says "It was her wedding day. She was so happy, so excited. And as she stared into her future husband's eyes, she realized that all the pain she suffered through, waiting for the wrong guy, was worth it."

does that mean they got together? that would be so cute if they did, it'd make a cute story too! :)
SunsetRainbow chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
What a great oneshot

that guy sounds like such a prick _
Cheshire.Stripes chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
This was as close to perfect as it is possible to get. Good job, :)

Irish Eyes 63 chapter 1 . 2/12/2011

This is so good! I loved the way you wrote in her perspective but still not going to one character's point of view. I loved the anger she had at him but never showed. I loved that she was strong enough to move on and start her life.

I also think that he was a douche bag for not paying attention to her and slowing down her life.

This was one of those One-Shots that I find only in like a million reads. This was striking and it just amazing in a simplicity. :D

You have got to keep writing if it is going to be as brilliant as this!

64ShatteredButterflys chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
this is so sad but it was really good and that guy was a dick!