Reviews for Army Brat Meets World |
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![]() ![]() So fictionpress isn't letting me log on for whatever reason so I will have to do it this way...you know who this is anyway :P OMG last chapter! What am i going to do with my life now? i'll guess I'll have to occupy myself with my German soap operas until you publish your new story, which i am really excited about, BTW! so you better hurry up and start publishing it ASAP missy! Anyway Ill get on to actually reviewing the chapter now... YES! Guilty! WOOT WOOT! YOU BETTER GO TO JAIL FOR A LONG TIME! and please dont have him break out like in Saving Bella part 2! That was so evil! Aww Noah is so cute! They are the most adorable couple ever...well most adorable straight couple anyway, cause you know my obession with slash! yours is still the only non-slash story i can read right now :O Awww the rest of their lives...*dies of adorableness!* Lol don't worry, i dont pay attention most of the time in my math class! thats kinda why i prob failed part of the quiz today...I was kinda doing other stuff during that lesson...*shrugs* oh well... I LOVE YOU AND THIS STORY AND EVERY SINGLE THING YOU DO! :) SO PLEASE HURRY UP AND PUBLISH YOUR NEW STORY SO I CAN OBSESS OVER IT! :) Good night, Expresso P.S. Wow its been a long long time since i've wrote as PS! Hmm...what to write, what to write? Oh did you get you writing off your legs? xD What did your teacher say after you missed like half the class so we could create our beautiful creation on your legs? And what did mummy say? xD OMG! its been like a month or longer since I've seen Mummy! I miss her! i need to go to your house soon! OH yeah and i have to watch VD this weekend so that we can freak out and spend the whole summer freaking out until September comes! This is why i hate this time of year! all my tv shows end and then i hav to wait until sept anf torture myself, cause you know they always end in a damn cliffe! just like your chapters! its so evil :O Anywh...i this im done now...i think this review is long enough for now :) SO I will review you again soon when you publish your new story :) |
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![]() ![]() I absolutely loved this story! So glad that Daddy went away. I adore Noah and how much he adores Ren. Such a great story. I was wondering, I wrote the second chapter in a story called "Mistaken Myths" by Violet Blacke, and I would appreciate it if you reviewed the story. It's under Action and it is kinda long, but I think you would enjoy it. Thanks, and again, awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely amazing story! I can't believe it's all done with now though ): Must write a spin-off, or sequel, or something. Maybe her dad gets out early for good behavior? Just ideas _ I loved this story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! So Cute and Incredible and just plain Awesome in General. I love the romance bits, especially in the previous chapter ;) You write really well and I would love to see an epilouge- Just further into the future. Or you could write a series of one-shots about the later life of Noah, Renee, Norah, the girls, and everyone else? I'm gonna subscribe to this just in case you decide to write an epilouge... |
![]() ![]() ![]() i LOVED it BEST story EVER! x100! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think i might have just changed my mind a LITTLE bit about Norah :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Stupid BROOKE -.- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Norah's mean :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahahahas Norah Riley :DD |
![]() ![]() ![]() omigosh big sister X) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter , mashter :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovee the story so far (: Only at Chapter 13 , but from now onwards I promise I will review EVERY chapter :DD hahahas X) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very very very good chapter :) That's all little ole me has ta say here :) Lol Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Terribly mean! I wanna know who walked into the court room, how court went, what is done with her father, and so on. So please, please, please update soon! Not having Noah in the chapters and his lovingness... well, it saddens me :( I think it was Noah who walked into the court room, though, actually :) |