This is full of emotion that I'm sure many people can relate to. I like on the flow of it, I think it works really well :) Good poem!

This was really good. I loved the ending too.

I've felt this way myself when I don't here from someone i love.

So, please may I ask. Check out my poems on fan fiction? Thank you very much. Your a good poet and i would love to get your opinion. I'm new at this.

this is really good :). Why didn't you title it "stifling"? I always hold a good poem that rhymes close to me. Nice job