I like this. It's short and funny and not to hard on the eyes either. _ Very nice.

I love fantasy! This was awesome! I feel bad for the familiar though. T-T

That was neat, you should write more of that, I realy liked it!

Fun...but I sort of missed the "tell you that you're mine" comment. I like the way that you don't feel constrained by the need to have a beginning, end, or explanation. It sounds freer, more true that way. Are there many metaphors in it, or is it just good description? And word processing IS evil.

how cute!