Reviews for My Name is Caroline
Lupo669 chapter 4 . 2/29/2012
Planting the seeds of doubt :-)
Lupo669 chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
Nice beginning...
mickey burriss chapter 5 . 2/15/2011
You refer to Lewis as Father but she earlier does not believe he is her father. Yuo go from almost 14 to 8 to 13 consider following a chronological time line for unfolding hte story. still a good read. Mickey
mickey burriss chapter 4 . 2/15/2011
"those people, they took you from me." give their name please.

Eleminates confusion. I would like for Lewis to show how they took her from him. Taking a child from a natural parent is legally difficult to do. Was Lewis an unfit parent? lot of things I want to know. will keep reading you have my curosity. Mickey
mickey burriss chapter 3 . 2/15/2011
I assume the Father in the first three chapters are the same man. Her real farher who kidnapped her. Think about giving him a name to help keep me good read. Mickey
mickey burriss chapter 2 . 2/15/2011
The first person narrator used the word "You" I thought at first the narrator was speaking to the reader. Later "yourself" was used. These two pronouns created uncertainty for me in following the story. You were smart to put the portion about star gazing in your opening. It moved faster and captures the reader. I still want to know what will happen. good job. Mickey
mickey burriss chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
It pulled me in. I liked Chapt one much. I plan to read more. Mickey Burriss